After we all read "The Red Wheelbarrow" poem, Mr.Jabiz told us to also make a poem with using word "So much depends upon.." and here's my poem, i hope you like it :)
Friends
You make my world colorful
Like a rainbow in the sky
Whispering a melodic news
So much depends upon
Sunshine
People need your shining light
When he show his awesome light
All the rain is getting shy
So much depends upon
Candy
I know you were very tiny
But your taste is so yummy
Like a jolly family
I dont know that you can make good poem anin :)
ReplyDeletegreat! well I guess I will follow your blogs? :) Nice to know you! say Hi ASAP to me