Wednesday, February 16, 2011

So Much Depends Upon...




After we all read "The Red Wheelbarrow" poem, Mr.Jabiz told us to also make a poem with using word "So much depends upon.." and here's my poem, i hope you like it :)

So much depends upon 
Friends
You make my world colorful 
Like a rainbow in the sky
Whispering a melodic news 




So much depends upon 
Sunshine
People need your shining light
When he show his awesome light
All the rain is getting shy







So much depends upon
Candy
I know you were very tiny
But your taste is so yummy
Like a jolly family 




1 comment:

  1. I dont know that you can make good poem anin :)
    great! well I guess I will follow your blogs? :) Nice to know you! say Hi ASAP to me

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