Sunday, February 13, 2011

Love That Dog by: Sharon Creech


In a recent weeks we're focused on reading a book called "Love That Dog". Then Mr.Jabiz told us to record the poem by using an application on the mac.

"Blue Car" Poem by Anindya.T

poem :

Blue car, blue car, shining bright
in the darkness of the night:
who could see you speeding by
like a comet in the sky?

I could see you in the night,
blue car, blue car, shining bright.
I could see you speeding by
like a comet in the sky.

Well actually i also made a poem by myself. I named it "Sunshine".
Please Enjoy :)

Sunshine by Anindya.T

Poem :

Sunshine shining in the sky
Oh the light is very bright
And the rain is getting shy
When you show your awesome light

When the sky is getting dark
People needs your shining bright
So the people in the park
Hoping for your awesome light

1 comment:

  1. Very well done. I love that first beat it sounds like some kind of monster. Great use of horns and your energy comes across very clearly. You also did a great job of rhyming the ending words of each line.

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